me shivering
my blanket too thin
i curl up
my palms warm my shin
misty breath
condenses on my skin
I seek heat
Still cold where I lean
Toes bent
My frozen eyes squint
My bed feels like
Icy flint
Could use some warmth
On this coldy wint…
my blanket too thin
i curl up
my palms warm my shin
misty breath
condenses on my skin
I seek heat
Still cold where I lean
Toes bent
My frozen eyes squint
My bed feels like
Icy flint
Could use some warmth
On this coldy wint…
5 comments:
a very good poem.
i feel the coldness as i read this.
i love "misty breath condenses my skin"...
i could use some warmth, as well.
lovely poem :) and thanks for the comment :)
you have me shivering with the cold, your imagery is great!
nicely said..i like it..
I really liked the way you drive the point home with the sudden ending to the last line. Very skillfully done.
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